2023-2024 Wharton Lauder MBA Essay Tips and Example Essays

Jun 30, 2023

UPDATE: This article was originally posted on August 17, 2020. It has been updated with new information and tips below.

As one of the most highly-coveted MBA dual degree programs anywhere in the world, the Lauder program at Wharton offers globally-minded professionals the chance to add a Master’s in International Studies to their MBAs. 

Given its tight-knit network, envy-inducing travel schedule, and access to top thought leaders around the world, landing a spot in the Lauder program is no small feat. 

That’s why we’ve prepared this guide to help you use your Lauder admissions interview to stand out. We’ve rounded up our best tips and links to Wharton Lauder MBA sample essays to ensure you give your Haas application your best shot. 

 

1. Who is Lauder Looking for?

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Lauder looks for globally-minded professionals who are poised to become future global business leaders. 

In general, Lauder admits can clearly demonstrate and articulate an understanding of current events, especially those related to their target region. Furthermore, our most successful applicants have had an extensive track record of living, working, and/or volunteering abroad. As such, when applying to Lauder, you want to make sure you highlight the full picture of your global experience! 

Finally, keep in mind that all Lauder applicants must complete the OPI language exam to prove proficiency in a language other than English. Each track within the program has specific requirements, so make sure to review those before scheduling your exam! 

 

2. How should I answer Wharton Lauder essay question?

 

2.1. Lauder Essay Tips 

Discuss why you are applying to the Lauder Institute, detailing specific reasons, experiences, and background for choosing your Program of Concentration, as well as your interest in further study in that Program. Applicants to Programs of Concentration involving language study (Africa-French; East and Southeast Asia; Europe; Latin America; South Asia, the Middle East, and North Africa) should also discuss what they hope to gain from advanced language and cultural education, as well as describe how they have learned the language they will study (e.g. undergraduate courses, undergraduate major, etc.). Finally, please describe how you see yourself benefiting from, and contributing to, the Lauder community. (800 words)

Like many other dual-degree programs, the Lauder essay essentially asks you to create a personal statement that outlines three key aspects: your relevant previous experiences, your goals and motivations for these goals, and how you plan to use the Lauder program to help you in reaching your goals. 

Each of these elements must be included and must build off of each other. 

First of all, many candidates think they do not need to specifically state their goals, or that it’s better to leave “their options open.” If you are applying to elite business schools, however, you must have and present absolutely clarity about your goals. 

However, goals without context can be a little confusing to decipher or understand (or they can just seem a bit lackluster), especially in the context of the Lauder application, where your global experience thus far is highly relevant to the plans you share for the future. For this reason, we suggest starting your essay with context. 

For example, a client last year initially started his essay by saying: 

“I want to participate in Lauder’s Global Track because I want to expand my professional horizons.”

However, by first going into several STAR-format examples that demonstrate how he built his previous global experience, then stating his clarified short-term and long-term goals, he was able to build a much more compelling case for admissions. 

When choosing your stories, here, be careful to make sure each is in some way relevant to the goals you intend to present. Stories that are totally disconnected from your goals will lead to a very confusing essay. 

Need more guidance? Our MBA Resource Center has numerous Wharton Lauder essays that worked to get our clients admitted to help you plan out a winning Wharton Lauder essay. Our library also includes guides for all top global MBA programs, detailed essay brainstorms, interview tips and mocks, CV templates, and recommendation letter guides. Click to join

Second, you should clearly demonstrate why you need to complete the Lauder dual-degree program (not just an MBA) in order to reach your goals. 

The Lauder program is not a “travel” program or a degree option that serves a purpose for all career paths. As such, you need to demonstrate that the goals you have set for yourself require the additional training and global access offered by the Lauder program. You should explicitly state the concentration you are applying for (Global, Spanish, Africa, etc.) and why you are motivated to apply for this track in light of your specific career goals. 

Be thoughtful about this particular section. If you don’t need a rich, in-depth global experience (which may be focused on a particular region or language) to reach your goals, you might be presenting the argument the admissions committee needs for why you can’t actually benefit from this dual degree program.

Furthermore, if you show fluffy or unsupported reasons you need to hone your skills, or, worse, mention you really like to travel as your reason for wanting to attend Lauder, you’ll also likely see your application tossed aside in favor of an applicant who was able to clearly demonstrate how they plan to leverage their time at business school. 

Keep in mind that the Lauder admissions committee will also have access to your Wharton essays. So, while you should make sure your arguments are consistent, you should focus on how Lauder will be an essential complement to your MBA education in this essay, rather than rehashing all the reasons you need an MBA. 

Third, add how Lauder can specifically help you grow in the areas you’ve identified. Mentioning that you want to go to Lauder because you get to visit many different countries during the program will simply not cut it. 

Instead, show that you understand the Lauder curriculum and have done significant, thoughtful research into how the opportunities both inside and outside of the classroom can help you grow. It’s also highly recommended that you mention how you can contribute to the community. 

End with a winning conclusion statement that reinforces your extensive global experience and passions to tie the whole essay together.

TOP TIP: If you have a second option track (for example, you’re applying for the Global track but would also be interested in the Europe track), you can leave a brief explanation at the bottom of your essay about why you would be open to being considered for your second choice option. If you do this, make sure the reason this track is a good second option for your goals is clearly yet concisely stated. 

Looking for Wharton Lauder essay examples? Check out our real sample essays that got our clients admitted here.

 

3. Get into Wharton Lauder

Landing a spot at Lauder is no easy task. You’ve spent years building a track record of professional success, dedicated yourself to getting a good GMAT score, and carefully developed your application strategy. 

Now is the time to make sure your accomplishments truly shine, and the only way to do so is to write a clear, compelling admissions essay. 

Ellin Lolis Consulting began with one mission: provide the best possible service to our clients and get them the best possible results. Serving our customers is at the core of our company, and we know that applying for an MBA can be a difficult, long process, but our goal is to take away as much of the stress as possible by acting as your ally in the process. 

So if you need much more than just a few comments on your essay, but instead want focused help shaping how you present your life’s greatest hits to one of the world’s toughest critics, you can count on us. 

Our tailored approach was critical to helping our client Mariama secure a spot at Lauder.  

Our editing service focuses on helping you determine how to present yourself in your Lauder essay while using appropriate, impact-driven language and adequate storytelling techniques. 

That’s why 98.9% of our clients secure admissions to at least one of their target schools

Get in touch and let our award-winning team of writers and storytellers help you make an unforgettable first impression. 

 

4. Wharton Lauder Deadlines

The deadlines for the 2023-2024 season are below. You can access the Lauder application as part of the Wharton application. 

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